Ooo good question, there’s a couple of things I would tell you to consider. Have you reached the end of the poem? Are you clear about what else you have to say? If so, say it, as plain as it is and then tweak it accordingly. But ultimately I would say let the poem breathe, put it away and come back to it some other time. Your subconscious is clever enough to work without you. When it comes, it comes.
Thank you for stopping by, reading and sharing this beautiful comment with me.
Re the body of work, you certainly will! :) #working
Thank you for reading them :)
1. Collected or selected poems/ Emily Dickinson
2. for colored girls who have considered suicide when the rainbow is enuf/ Ntozake Shange
3. Teaching my mother how give birth/ Warsan Shire
Every second of you reading it is appreciated, thank you :)